The tenderness - the Heat


I'v been listening to people tonite

some of them are now screaming in the Swedish night

They want to go home with another
or just want to settle a deal

fists and kisses are common
in the June-fever
of Swedish-night

I listened to "Welcome to the jungle"
today at work

and though I might be ready for fight and love

I'm trying to let it be ...
and let the feeling flow through me

everything that I see

I balance it

with getting fucked up drunk on wine

all by my self.






Poetry by Ivan R
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Written on 2013-06-24 at 02:25

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I came looking at your site and found this poem that struck me as such a good writing about life and about your heart. Your poetry is deep. You are a thinker. :)
2014-01-26


melanie sue
I think this is an excellent expression taking a glimpse into the scathing reality of some. Very well done, Ivan. I applaud your work. Thank you
2014-01-08


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
How the heat can affect, I like this it is raw

Elle
2013-06-24



Brutal and raw and real. Enigmatic title that captures the contrast of emotions.
2013-06-24