Still Waters.

Still waters run deep or so they say
A life that wanders day by day
To seek a form to give direction
A past now gone beyond correction

A future masked by mists of time
Reverberate in thoughts of rhyme
Of deeds now done and in the past
Embrace that which you hope will last

An altered being a change in life
Freedom from the stress and strife
Tease the soul enwrapped in sorrow
Beguiling that which comes tomorrow.



Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2006-04-13 at 10:54

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Pamela A Lamppa
There is much to be thought on within this piece. A pleasure to read and so very smooth. Nicely done. ~Pam
2006-05-17


holybear
Jim Croce could have done great things with these words! Great stuff.
2006-04-25


GB
Well done Penfold .. LIKED this prose so much . GOOD feel about it ... G
2006-04-18


Bob
I liked this a lot, especially the first two stanzas.
2006-04-16


Lourdes
This poem is a river,
in so many ways.
2006-04-16


Kathy Lockhart
your reflections are so open, so honest. I sympathize with your loss and pray comfort surrounds you. You have a gift of expression in poetry. Thank God you use it especially to help through the this grieving process. I am deeply moved. Kathy
2006-04-13


BlueyedSoul
It is good to come here and see you on the page again Graham. This is just one example of why I love reading your work. Always on the mark, a joy to read no matter.

Loss and life....and we ponder our very existence, as we are forced to accept the changes the life brings everyday...i feel your pain in this write Graham.
2006-04-13


Malin Johansson
This was a very good poem... I got really stuck in it... It made me be so aware of the things you write about here, in this poem...
2006-04-13


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
graham glad to see you back in swing this is a very good poem man well done rgds mike
2006-04-13