*see note under poem
Stone Snowmen [version 1]
Stone men tantalize the shoreline-
The totemic temporal tributes
Draped with a Tanzanite skyline
where their shadows lie so mute
before blending into the nighttime.
*This was the first version in a rhyming style. It is based on notes of raw material I scribbled as we traveled. Later, it developed into version 2, a more developed version without a rhyme scheme. The poems can be read literally, but they are actually meant more as metaphor.
*Tanzanite is one of my birthstones and is beautiful. Discovered in the late 1960s in Tanzania, and found exclusively in this tiny area of the world, tanzanite exhibits a rich dark blue to violet-blue color for which the gemstone is treasured.
[ http://www.americangemsociety.org/december-birthstones ]
Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2014-01-08 at 15:15
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