Psyche revived by Cupid's kiss by Antonio Canova
The hidden bow(triolet challenge & rhyming effort)
Pouty lips hide your cupid's bow
& I stop breathing
Not like our very first hello
Pouty lips hide your cupid's bow
Experience my touch like you know
Ow why? Your lower lip is still twitching
Pouty lips hide your cupid's bow
& I stop breathing . . .
Original draft:
ABaAabAB
1Pouty lips hide your bow A
second line B
rhyme with bow a
4Pouty lips hide your bow A
rhyme with bow a
rhyme with line two b
7Pouty lips hide your bow A
repeat line two B
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cupid's_bow
Poetry by night soul woman
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Written on 2014-02-11 at 00:02
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