THE DEFIANT DAFFODIL!

Once upon a time not so long ago
A house had stood - a home had stood
The house were a home

A mother and father raising children
Saw them grow up, leave home, having
Their own families

Mum and dad tending the garden
Planting it out, veg in the back
Flowers out the front, a well-kept lawn
Bulbs, tulips, and of course daffodils
Rose bushes, in short, the garden a delight

Then it was decided to develop Westwood
Build a shopping center, in the U S, call it a shopping mail

Mum and dad - husband and wife
Held out as long as they could
Buildings went up all around their family home

They were in the end made to give in
They got a good price right enough
Tho how can a price be put on all their memory's?

The family home bulldoze down, into rubble and dust
Their garden disappeared under concrete and tarmac
To make way for a Debenhams, store

Nothing left of what once was there
Yet, something stubbornly remained
While walking to Ramsgate from Margate, one late afternoon I noticed

A humble daffodil, every spring broke to the service Bobbing its head the yellow Petals, waving the daffodils defiance

The daffodil remained defiant for a few years
Until one day the daffodil was no longer there
Maybe a family member came back and dug up that defiant daffodil
And took it home to a new garden, maybe, I like to think so

Ken D Williams

The Dyslexic Wordsmith Ov Thanet





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Written on 2014-05-01 at 12:43

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Ivan R
Such a beautiful and delicate poem, though showing the bad times, a family gone from their roots, and so the daffodil was to take the same route,
I'm very much in love with this poem, so great, in every corner of the ending lines,
made me sad, but in a good way, because I got to see the great feelings of a lifetime.
2014-05-09


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
I can identify to this in a way... the building where I grew up in the second half of my life burnt down to the ground in 2009, and my step-father's house when he sold it was demolished and two complexes of condos were built on the plot. The visual attachment to the memories that were there are gone and it leaves an emptiness hard to describe... but I think you describe it here. Loved the ending too, very nice :) *hugs* xx
2014-05-02


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Great ending, Ken, surprising and encouraging.
2014-05-01



This is beautiful! I love how you brought in the daffodil to show that the memory remains. Besides death, I think we can always count that there will be change if life, for better or worse. It's often hard to deal with, but we have the memories.
2014-05-01