Words Like Coins

His meaning was
sharp and swallowed,
with words like coins
jangling in a jar.

"I've been out
for nine days..."



Poetry by Soup in the Sand
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Written on 2014-10-28 at 00:28

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Very well done. The sound of the words and the implied threat is what I feel from this poem.
~Ashe
2014-10-28