now I will haunt you forever, motherfucker


my last punk, asshole


the things you say
now
are the things I erase
now
you slam the door
now
and leave me to pace
back and forth
back
now
(no where to hide)
you will be back
(pace,pace,pace)
now
back

for another round
you twist my arm
push me down
until I can taste your footprints on the ground
until my scream is sewed back to the sound
of the flapping of my wings
set in the right position

beware now

I`ve still got ammunition

my death

now

your demolition



Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-04-25 at 23:19

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
So powerfully angry and so well crafted
you imagry created with these words is awesome god who is this fool his loss well done again rgds mike
2006-04-26


Amanda Manmohan
Definitely one of the most powerful poems I have read on this site so far. You used the simplest words to make me feel exactly how u felt.. completely angry and ready to fight back. The ending is the best part. I can't wait to read more of your poems!
2006-04-26


Kathy Lockhart
Anger, yes, pure anger, JUSTIFIED! Anger is empowering. You captured it, faced it, conqured it, and exposed it. There are many "punk, assholes" in this world, I am glad that you blasted this one!!! Kathy
2006-04-26


Hasani
I honestly couldn't figure out what to say here at first. What you wrote I can definitely relate to in some ways but, I dunno.. Heh I guess I don't know what to say even now. Keep writing though, it's surprising how sometimes someone can say better than myself what I want to say on my own..
2006-04-26


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
haha. The angst of todays ethnic minorities.

A good write as usual :) Keep it up.
2006-04-26