broken ice

bleak and blistered
tundraic whispers howl
with deft tendrils of
liquid nitrogen, then
in a flurry of dust devils
this landscape's void of
voices once more



Poetry by arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2016-05-21 at 12:28

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes, it has the exact feel of a frozen world.
2016-05-27


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I could feel the chill of the tundra, beautiful, image provoking

Elle x
2016-05-21


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
I like it too, and it's the liquid nitrogen tendrils which make it vivid for me, though whispering howls across the tundra is awesome.
2016-05-21


shells
I like it, especially your second line.
2016-05-21