la la

 

 

after school

la la takes me home

we dance

in her bedroom

 

she is layla

but i call her la la

we are eleven

 

this is how i am remembering it

in her bedroom

dancing

then i go home

 

that's all

just dancing

we didn't know

 

 

 

 

 

 

~

 





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Written on 2015-04-13 at 04:44

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I agree with Ashe and Fog.
2015-04-18


countryfog
So much is said by leaving it unsaid, simply "we didn't know." This is one of those times when elaboration would have destroyed the poem.
2015-04-13



'Just dancing
We didn't know,
How beautiful and subtle.
+(from Sweden)
2015-04-13


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
My granddaughter's name is Layla! I'm saving this for her to read later... She'll be two in August. :-))
2015-04-13


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
A very cute vignette. Nice memories.
2015-04-13