I couldn't even figure out a good name for this.. I literally did it in 5 minutes..


*click*

Don't go
Don't leave
Don't leave me here
Stay with me please
Hold my hand
Keep me near
Don't look away
I know you care
I hurt so much
I can't let go
I must let go
I have no choice
I'm sick of goodbyes
I'm sick of failed tries
I'm sick whenever
You don't reply
Don't walk away
Don't close the door
Please don't leave me
On the floor
The doorknob turns
The door clicks shut
The lights go off
You leave
Never to return




Poetry by Hasani
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Written on 2006-04-29 at 03:28

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Lourdes
oh no.. this is amost too sad !
but still, a brilliant write. The pace underlines the words.
2006-05-02


Jon Hanover
Have been honing my speed in writing. Has helped me visulaize poems and more complexity than I thought possible. This is a good poem, very emotional and yet solid.
2006-04-29