for hungry souls


Herds
at full gallop
across
verdant rolling plains

Rushing
rivers slither
rampant
to open~watered seas

Astride
distant stretches
uproar
of oceans and waves

Plateau
oases stretch on
speckled, sable blanket:
stars keep wishes fed




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Poetry by arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-05-25 at 23:39

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice. It brings to mind a luscious painting.
2015-05-28


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I like this, it is imagery in poetry, thank you

Elle
2015-05-26



The style that seems to keep the reader moving fast, feeling the rush of the poem. An urgency to keep going to reach those plains. Love the poem.
Ashe
2015-05-26


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
i like the way the title, the italics, and the poem itself come together. it's uplifting and has momentum. i even like the little morse code symbols at the end, though i don't know what they mean.
2015-05-26