At a Loss

My eyes miss
What my heart still sees
In endless lonely moments
Like these....

Dismembered joys
Entwine with pain
I mourn, I smile,
I mourn again.

Memories sweet
And a twist of the knife

Curious confusing

Echoes of life.



Poetry by Yanto
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Written on 2015-08-13 at 23:02

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh I meant :) not ;) A slip of the keyboard.
2015-08-19


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
You show the feeling of loss even after some time so well in this piece. It flows beautifully and rhymes so well ;)
2015-08-19


Ivan R
Each line got this reader deeper and deeper ... it was not a poem that showed its force outwards, but let each word of the poet follow him inwards ...
like a form of meditation, in this beautiful poem.
2015-08-14


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
a gently suggestive poem, "echoes of life" delicately put.
2015-08-14