I want my water back


expired through
the last mercy-sleep

today's paper movements
are the clouds
coming from your eyes

fetch me a tall drinking cup

I want my water back



Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-05-02 at 17:46

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Jon Hanover
Very nice. What happened to the pic of the hot chick ? Great write.
2006-05-03


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this is such a deep metaphorical poem that i find a host of images chiefly through the image of fulfillment after a period of desolution well done rgds mike
2006-05-02