Sun Down

The memories burn
As the sun goes down
As the shadows turn
As the days go round

Will I ever learn
To take control
Of my foolish heart
And lonesome soul.



Poetry by Yanto
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Written on 2015-10-06 at 01:22

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Simple but very good. I think we all ask that question to the sunset.
2015-10-11


countryfog
This benefits greatly from its brevity and simplicity, not a wasted word nor any other needed, and a perfect way of asking a question that has been asked for thousands of years by thousands of "foolish hearts and lonesome souls." I think the only answer is the asking.
2015-10-06


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Very succinct and good attention to rhyme and rhythm. Nicely done!
2015-10-06