Story about a storm.


Too Much Going On

Henry wakes up. He can't find his
tooth brush!
He can't find his hair comb!
He can't find his clothes to put on!
Whats going on?
The lights have all gone out.
His dog is barking loudly
at something, it seems invisible!
Whats going on?
Henry runs outside, its pitch black!
No moon!
No stars!
He hears no voices and he sees
no faces.
In the distance he hears a
heavy rumble.
Sounds like thunder.
Whats going on?



Short story by Dorsey Baker The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-11-16 at 22:25

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Quite ominous for Henry. I like rain but hate heavy storms. Nice piece :)
2015-11-22



Oh oh! Yes, there is a lot going on, and it's scary when the lights go out and all is dark outside. There's a storm coming and it's time to go back inside and find the candles. This poem brings back so many memories. Very well done. You have captured the moment.
2015-11-16