observations




crying

quiet on a sunbaked bench

the world goes on around her

people and dogs and cats and air and trees…

as she remains silent

crying





Poetry by Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-12-08 at 11:20

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Rielle Vobi
I enjoyed the quiet descriptions that said so much in such beautifully few words.
2016-01-23


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
I like pieces that leave you thinking. And I love watching people and wondering what is going on in their lives. Nice.
2015-12-14



A short but enticing read. Wonderful.
2015-12-14


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
i've seen such scenes, as i'm sure most of us have. you've expressed it well. i've also been the person crying, watching as the world goes on about its business, as i'm sure most of us have.
2015-12-10


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Ashe is right.
2015-12-08



A perfect image of sadness.
Ashe
2015-12-08