Rush Hour

Your words crowd into my ears
Like impatient commuters
Boarding a late train.

Squabbling over the last few seats
In my over capacity brain.





Poetry by Yanto
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Written on 2016-01-06 at 21:25

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Spare and perfect.
2016-01-08



What an amazing metaphor!!! I love this!
Ashe
2016-01-07



Short sweet and damn brilliant. God damn it this is is a poem to hold and learn by heart so as to shout it out whenever someone is being too overbearing. I love it!
2016-01-06