A story about what love is meant to be!


Two Plus Two Equal Love

She was beautiful
He was handsome
The touch
The kiss
A flame ignited
a fire burning so strong
They couldn't fight it
Two plus two
Equal love

Enjoying the magic moment
before it is gone
a house turned into a home
Two plus two
Equal love!



Poetry by Dorsey Baker The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2016-01-07 at 00:23

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
very nice.
2016-01-13


shells
I enjoyed the simplicity of the poem, I'm happy to keep it that simple and I'm sure for some, it is.
2016-01-07


Deeps
It is a layered poem. Yes reciprocity in equal force and sometimes response with even greater force is potent throbbing love and life source. Yes, equal love!
2016-01-07


Arunesh dixit
Four letters of Love !!! Four Eyes join to make Love !!! Two bodies and two souls merge together and make Love!!!
This "Love" diminishes all numbers and becomes One. Ideal case. Good thought and nice poem.

Arunesh
2016-01-07



A sweet little poem about how love should be but never is. I enjoyed it. We all need a bit of escapism in our lives.
2016-01-07



You say it is a poem about what love is meant to be. In an ideal world that is how it should be. But as you read the many love poems right here on this site you read the many complications and the difficulties encountered in loving. I enjoyed reading the poem.:)
2016-01-07