| A Letter to Matthew
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2009-08-07
Touching poem i must say and a really personal one. Don't worry he will come back just be faithful and pray to God for him has you have done in this poem.
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| Eccentricity
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2009-07-21
This is a good poem about the disadvantages of being a good person. In everything we the are advantages and disadvantages. Nice write here its good
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| Demon's Corral
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2009-07-21
lovely poem, and easy to read
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| Ethereal
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2009-07-21
A very good descriptive poem which makes the reader wonder and think about this Ethereal. Very good poen here
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| Empathica Remnants Of Rotting Poet
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2009-07-21
Such a sweet poem to read i like the ryhmes and the couplets. The third verse has a very deep meaning than you can imagine.
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| Bad Stuff, Good Stuff
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2009-06-26
This a lovely poem u should make sure that ur good stuff weighs more than your bad stuff. Very simple poem its good
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| Twarted Tiger[Repost]
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2009-06-15
interesting poem here and a nice story i like it
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| Fumes of the Grave
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2009-06-15
A very good poem i like the use of language though hard.
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| Mother Nature and Water, the Elixir of Life
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2008-06-02
You describe situations well and you went all around welldone.
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| A Journey to Love
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2007-09-20
This is lovely it shows how much a female can love a male.
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| A Man's Heart (Co-Write Rik & F.i.in.e Moods)
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2007-09-20
This tells youths about the ingredients of a sweet life and how in a special way to make heaven. This is a very fine collabo
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| 74) Forgive Love
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2007-07-31
touching moving and emotional
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| Journeying Trials
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2007-07-31
this is a very good didatic poem if some reads this it might change the person's life and altitude.
You have written a very nice and simple piece
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| Wander
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2007-07-11
cool poem there is an atmosphere of love in it short and beautiful
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| Verdant Fields Of Love a Cowrite by Katherine Lockhart and M.A.Meddings
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2007-07-11
this is a lovely sonnet you guys are very good in cowrites i must say
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| Happiness
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2007-06-12
I like the repetition and the way u wrote this poem the word are very simple and lovely
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| Dejavu
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2007-06-12
Good poem i love the ryhmes and inserting a little theme about love makes it perfect
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| GRRRRRRRRRR!
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2007-05-30
U should by a new one if it is loan just get it. My dad and i have always bee disagreeing on the issue of his ramshackle car he says there is no money to buy a new car and he would not take loans i hope that will not be your answer.
I love the topic of this poem
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| For ever And Forever by M.A.Meddings
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2007-05-03
nakedness of the opposite is it that interesting. With due respect sir is it dat u were piping and the lady and if so is it right.
Lovely poem i respect it
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| A beautiful world
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2007-05-03
Cool i like it is really a beautifull world all lines are the best
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| Way Back When (co-write with Michael Meddings)
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2007-05-01
this is great i like the story i will read reread and read again. The way to go lol
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| As Do Thee Enchant Me Now by M.A.Meddings
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2007-04-25
this is a good poem i feel it
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| Hells angels
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2007-04-20
This is great!
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| Heat
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2007-04-20
yah that is it the red colour i mean.
nice poem it is heaty
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| Cool Light
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2007-04-17
Beauriful poem! the physical stucture is commendable .
Nice poems i respect it
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| His Gifts
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2007-04-17
Cool! fast quick and smooth.
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| O Cruel!
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2007-04-17
another good poem from u again. Indeed it is cruel
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| If You Could Really See
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2007-04-11
This is nice a great poem u have written
If u could really see
that your poem is more than what u see
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| She Was Robbed
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2007-04-11
Nice poem well i am sure she would get over it as time goes by. You have written a simple, comprehensive and pitiful poem. I respect it
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| The Englishman and The Rose
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2007-04-11
this is very lovely. I like the way u write this poem i was exepecting a ballad but u link them with some nonliving things and that is really unique.
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| Softly I Come To You ( cinquain poem co-write with Michael Meddings)
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2007-04-05
This is nice cool and beautiful. Love is important in once life if u dont have one i think u are missin is'nt?
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| The Missing Poem
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2007-03-29
this is a straight foward poem. Sometimes a group of people or things are always complete but there will always be something missing. I this scenario it is a missing poem. But what about the Super Eagles?
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| Timeless Rose
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2007-03-29
This is a nice and lovely poem. i like it
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| I am just a boy...
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2007-03-28
In a way your poems are always unique. i like it.
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| Annoying Telephone Frustration[Tanka]
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2007-03-28
This tanka though short has very important and vast meaning. I agree with the last two sentences
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| a path
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2007-03-28
This is a very serious poem. And it gives the reader a deep thought.
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| My Sail...My Story
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2007-03-26
This is great u used ur poem to tell us about life.
Omo i gbadun this poem o.
A poem very didactic poem
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| Deep Inside by M.A.Meddings
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2007-03-23
this is verily and truely written. I like it
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| KINDNESS (acrostic)
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2007-03-23
this is a nice threat. It should be read by everybody before he/she brush his/her teeth.
I completely concur with you. But sometimes when you show kindness to some people the tend to pay you back with evil.
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| Every tone they bring
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2007-03-19
Very nice poem especially the rhymes u constructed this poem well i like it
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| Small Seedling Soul
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2007-03-19
Nice poem short and comprehensive. I respect it
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| Only One[Ours Is A True Love Born]
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2007-03-19
Nice poem simple and rhythmic.
This is what couples believe and assert when the first meet or in their early relationship. Later they start to fall apart.
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| Those Things You Do
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2007-03-19
Surely the personae is really in love. Lovely piece of poem.
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| Love, Hate and Vendetta
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2007-03-14
Nice u have spoken for us all. This is great!
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| 10th, March Uprising Day
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2007-03-10
Memory will long run for ever u have told and reminded your people who they are and where there are coming from. i like this poem
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| Alive by M,A.Meddings
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2007-03-10
i swear any girl lady or damsel this poem is written to will fall for it. She will melt! yes she will. Try it.
This is a very good poem ful of assonance alliteration and ryhthm.
I respect it
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| The Signature of Our Souls
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2007-03-07
wow this is very nice i like it.
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| searching
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2007-03-07
We all search for some in life the prayer is that what we are searchin for should be searchable or seeable.
A well written piece. I respect it.
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| Murum Sarciendum
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2007-03-07
Nice innovation i like it. This is really good
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| Harmonising Echoes[Co-write with KJC]
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2007-03-07
This is a well written co write i like it. When we work in harmony things will get better.
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