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Ngoc Nguyen

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Seashore Silence

2018-06-04
Susurration?.... Great word! Wonderful poem.


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2018-05-29
2010, by Thomas Defreitas


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2018-05-29
1989, by Thomas Defreitas


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2018-05-29
Tankas for Tomorrow, by Bibek


The Stopped Clock

2018-05-28
A wonderfully ambitious piece, indeed! I enjoyed it.


THOSE WHO READ MY WORKS! (With More Thoughts!)

2018-05-28
I READ you, ken!


Mental institution

2018-05-25
Great last two lines...very profound and memorable!


Drowned In Tears

2018-05-25
In these lines I, myself, can almost feel the pain causing your heart to weigh so heavy on your soul.... Hopefully, this (struggle) too shall pass.


True Lies

2018-05-25
A fun read. I enjoyed it, too.


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2018-05-25
The Lonely Lane by Bibek


The Lonely Lane

2018-05-21
Very well done! Your poetry is very mature. And a delight to enjoy, as always.


Sunrise [Revised]

2018-05-18
Brilliant poem! I am simply jealous for not being its author. You are undoubtedly a poetic genius, Thomas! Super well done!


Half-baked Haiku

2018-05-18
A very nice cascade of half-baked haikus!


Tankas for Tomorrow

2018-05-18
Subtle and expressive beauty in (these) words and lines...! Fair to say you have already surpassed yourself, in my opinion. Well done!


Break-up Villanelle

2018-05-18
A villanelle writ to be emulated!


A Triolet

2018-05-18
A model triolet and ideal template to imitate and learn from, in my opinion!


Notre Dame du Rosaire

2018-05-18
Very reverential and respectful in tone, insomuch that it is easily felt by the reader. Very nice work, indeed!


THE MARTIANS DON'T LIKE US EARTHLINGS!

2018-05-18
Definitely stimulates serious contemplation...!


PROFERTEERS AND TORYS!

2018-05-18
Curiously though, I like the "dyslexic" nature of your style of writing in this piece. I look forward to reading more of your work.


Hearts That Never Mend

2018-05-18
Very smooth and haunting flow from line to line and from stanza to stanza. I enjoyed the read. Very well done!


Villanelle at 1 a.m.: A Challenge

2018-05-08
Thomas, very nice villanelle in light of the fact that it was composed ad hoc! Well done!