Trying to find the answers.


Open up.

How do you find your way through,
I know hope is forever.
Greasing this mind to extend your theory,
So all of us can be free.

How do you blank out your regrets,
I know it's hard to do.
Seizing to fullfill, but eager to make efforts,
Where all of us can be free.

To the upperside, sliding to something unique,
I know it can't be done.
But open your eyes and engage imagination,
How all of us can be free.

A little group for religion,
I know it sounds doubtful.
But belief for survival is my first,
Why all of us can be free.

How do you place your tears so,
I know you try to hide.
But it helps to express it, God,
Please, please hear our plea.



Poetry by John Ashleigh
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Written on 2005-09-28 at 21:14

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blackestdaze
i hope he does hear our plea.

i like this... the search for answers...... such a huge undertaking.... i hope you find what you seek.
2005-10-02


Copy of a copy
Very well done, your words are engaging. They express something deeply human.
2005-09-30


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
all us can be free - all of us...

all us again in second verse, it sounds odd to the ear, all of sounds better. as in the other endings where you use that.

opening up, to ourselves initially i think, we have to find who we are in life. what we want etc. regrets, let them shiver away.
2005-09-29