Exceptional gaze

That exceptional gaze
that detonate between your
serious verbal sentences
Sends electronic signals
to cotton hearts

The smile that shows it self
in your sober face
gives you the charm
of a boy

and the warmth
you have
inside of you

makes everybody
fall down at your feet
at your service

You’ve got

so many
have none of

Poetry by Marlinda
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Written on 2009-01-15 at 20:26

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What a well thought through piece of patterned art structured to create such a flair of talent, this piece actually creates a pattern of words in my mind for some reason. I love the title, the way it illumines my senses, these words are placed so simply yet it says something creative especially mixed with the title. Well composed.
I would simply say you are in love?