Could we trade?, mine for yours...

The sorrow in your heart
reveals itself in your soul

and it breaks mine

I feel like a thrown glass  
in a brick wall
and I'm troubled


it's my blame  


my absences

can mend
your bleeding soul

and eliminate
your sorrow

if so

I'm gone







Poetry by Marlinda
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Written on 2009-10-20 at 19:20

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melanie sue
Oh, my.This has such a sad aura to it. It makes me think of how it is when a relationship needs to come to an end. Your descriptive imagery is perfect in conveying this sadness and it is not overdone.