When my sanity
inhales the aroma
of your presence

I experience it intensely
in my receptive soul

It all reminds me of a desert sea
because of the feeling of drowning
is outsized by the heat

and yet
they both exists

All I want

the only thing I hunger
with no regrets

is that you
sat intimately
next to me


and together

we could watch
the day go by

in silence

Poetry by Marlinda
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Written on 2009-10-23 at 12:53

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This is a lovely poem Marlinda.
I am sure I am not alone in feeling you should write more.
Thnaks, Nick

Stan Cooper
Hi Marlinda...
How lucky can that guy get...

lovely poem

xxx Stan

thanks for your help Achernar!

you have a few typos and tense errors, but very easy to fix... a very neat and nifty poem, I liked it a great deal!