Tis a high coo me heartyz


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What's good about her eyes?
They're open for half her life,
Half her life is ours.




Haiku by DanBennett
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Written on 2009-07-04 at 19:37

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DanBennett
thanks for the comments folks!

I just noticed that the first line has six syllables... but I think I'll just leave it how it is, because I like, totally don't care.
2009-07-04



Eye eye matey!lol fine haiku...which half is yours then? springs to these eyes wide open.

Sweet work. welcome to our bay of calming waters...

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-07-04



Unusual haiku. Enigmatic and provocative--and it adheres to the format perfectly.
2009-07-04