| A Gazebo's Magic
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2007-04-05
this is excellent...such a beautiful sonnet...lovely write filled with passion and romance
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| Sandalwood
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2007-04-04
managere de trois...hope i spelled it correctly...great sensual imagery...
when i am spent and lit no more,my aroma
lingers in your minds
that was my favorite part in this write filled with immaculate imagery...excellent
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| The Starlight Drive In
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2007-04-03
tis beautiful...took me back many years...me and the wife need a getaway like this...Starlight drive-in ...nice touch
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| He Plays Me
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2007-04-01
great imagery and metaphors here...lovely
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| Three's a fantasy
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2007-03-31
lovely flow... sensual...cool form...well done
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| Delicious Sin
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2007-03-31
i did get the metaphors after i commented,,,sorry i just hear the word gin and i get flashbacks...great write
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| Possession
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2007-03-31
yes...I can see that one needs to look deep into to this one to get it's meaning...i thought this excellent...i can relate ...fetishes...maybe some catholic guilt...your poem challenges imagination and that is a good thing-excellent
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| Delicious Sin
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2007-03-31
ahhh,gin..it's been a long time...a good write
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| In my heart...
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2007-03-25
beautiful tribute you have penned here...you are a lovely soul lavender
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| His Fingertips
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2007-03-21
good write here
i hide in the keys that his fingertips brush
great line ,well done
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| Inferno and the Knight
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2007-03-16
I like all your knight poems but I think this one may be your best...so carefully penned I thought it to be...brilliant!
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| Spare The Whip
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2007-03-15
lol..you go girl...good write with an excellent flow...well done
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| Sing a Song of Springtime
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2007-03-11
lol...lovely...what is sanity?...shopping at the mall, gambling in vegas?...lock those people up!...cool write
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| Searchlight
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2007-03-08
beautiful...the showering of diamond dew...lovely...great imagery
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| The Graveyard
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2007-03-05
excellent...I especially love the last 3 lines...very cool form...love the soildger trees imagery...very well done
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| ~~ Touch a Passing Cloud ~~
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2007-03-05
lovely...serene...wonderful imagery...harmony...loved it
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| Sometimes I feel I am the Rain
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2007-03-04
beautiful and serene...great imagery and flow...very soothing ...thank you
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