| The Waitress at the Hooters Up the Street
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2009-07-02
Sad and touching portrait of a young soul who scores well in marketing her burgers ...... you integrate so many facets of her life but we feel sadness for all she isn't .... in her journey through life!
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| Chestnut Candles
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2009-06-24
wonderful poem ..... its flow and meter and message colorful and positive ..... delightful and disciplined!
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| the trysting tree
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2009-06-23
Delightful poem .... I particularly like
"where bobbing boats
and the surf manes
of wild horses
rode to shore
a startled hare
bound o'er the ditch"
Tom Farrell
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| The Jockey
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2009-06-23
My money had been on By Jove! ...... It is a delightful poem and you show good use of meter and rhyme in a whisical way!
I need to read more of you work! Great poem!
Tom Farrell
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| New Speaker
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2009-06-23
my stocks are down, the rain keeps falling, Noah is handing out flyers in the grocery store and building planks and hanging around the pet stores talking to the tenants ...
I feel you pain .... and look for hope!
Tom
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| Snake Skin Revelations
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2009-06-23
Sometimes freedom is knowing the person that you have become and saying goodbye to those circumstances that are no longer a part of who you were! Praise God and you too!
Tom
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| Flirting
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2009-06-18
Great chapter one! ..... we wait for the next episode!
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| 10 Second Poems
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2009-06-18
Powerfully delightful and ever so true! and now with poetbay we get to do it with rhyme and meter or cadenced verse!
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| Following Ravens Of Shadow
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2009-06-17
civilized insanity ..... a wonderful concept ..... structured in purpose and utility kind of sanctifies its reason for acceptance!
Lovely meter and theme!
Write on!
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