| Fly high
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2009-08-06
oh, short but very nice and the message is so nice too. i too want to fly just with all the happy, blissful things.
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| Pride Is Too Stubborn For It's Own Good
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2009-07-31
oh, cool. pride is something that could really make the worst out of us. Pride was never gentle and sympathetic. i like this piece.
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| Good God Are You Alive?
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2009-07-26
cool, short but it really touched humanity and conscience ripping out from anyone's. nice work.
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| Environmental Pollution
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2009-07-26
Oh, i like this so much and yeah, i can't help but agree.
this is so real. well stated. =)
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| a dream
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2009-07-26
Oh, i love this one. This is such a wonderful piece. Very well stated. You tell the story very nice too. It's quite sad. Keep writing.
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| God And You (Triku : three related Haikus)
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2009-07-24
Oh, this is nice.
a short inspiring piece i should say.
thanks for posting.
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| The revolution
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2009-07-24
Oh, i like this.
i like revolution, change - social change and all.
everything about revolution, i love.
The rhymes are nice. it was really a nice piece.
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| Dilemma
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2009-07-24
Oh, it's sad. It's really hard when you're in such deep trouble of having to think what you're feeling. It calls for a go-between but i guess it won't work either. it's only ourselves, we can solve this.
a nice short piece.
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| Friend of the Devil
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2009-07-21
Oh, it's cool. LOL
was you the devil? errr.
it's good.
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| Eccentricity
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2009-07-21
Oh, thank you but it was no poem. It was my memoir during the time I'm vaining myself. Well, although being good has many disadvantages, i can say people will still want to be good and just better because there was never a disadvantage after all.
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| Especially For You, My Dear Friend.
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2009-07-21
Oh, how sweet. =)
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