| Rock Springs Stream
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2011-11-21
You surerly are a genious at opainting pictures with words and clever use of words that evoke emotions!
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| this can't go on
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2011-04-27
It is something that most of us can relate to! Nice presentation.
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| Darkness Within
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2011-04-26
I like your philosophy,
Its is true, some of the things we despise (mostly in others), we do because we are afraid we might do them. but we end up doing them anyway! In short everyone has a dark side inside.
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| Chaste.
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2011-04-26
A nice one.This is nice. We do not want to go back in time but rather its safe we make aour future better than the future for yesterday we donot have, today is at hand and tomorrow will be decided by how we spend our today! Nice write.
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| Rivulet of crystal.
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2011-04-26
I call this poetry. youhave a style that is unique and a very mature way of expression and right choice of diction! i like the part... Expect nothing from your merit,
Cavities tear into our limestone heart... U sure can do a painting with words. Nice piece. I loved it
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| GROWING UP
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2011-04-26
A nice presentation of how people pass judgement when they are young some even do that whe they are grown! Nice work man! Keep on writing.
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| Tears from my pen
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2011-04-26
Thanks John for your words of encouragement! I will keep on writing.
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| Tears from my pen
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2011-04-26
Thanks John for your words of encouragement! I will keep on writing.
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from Malawi 