| wish of wishes
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2006-05-25
You used the word "lofts"
wow, i love you.
Very good poem, i'm not exactly sure on my interpretation yet. but i really like it.
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| family ties
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2006-05-15
*other then the spelling error...
Very good, stanza stanza. I liked it, emotional. I had no idea.
<7
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| revenge
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2006-05-14
Your getting better quickly,
i like this one.
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| Love is
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2006-05-08
Grand ole' write.
and love is all these things.
very good.
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| Drowning Deeply Down Dust
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2006-05-06
can you say.
alliteration.
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| Stained
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2006-05-06
Pretty damn grand poem.
Love the emotions.
almost the words to express the day after a first love kiss.
really nice
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| power
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2006-05-06
rhyme repitition...?
l..o......l
fine write
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| emo 2
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2006-05-05
peises = peices.
You have a style of repitition,
which is fine.
Its good,
i love what of the mind it sparks.
*your not emo ryan*
lol <7
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| who
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2006-05-05
Who you ask,
who!
me...?
Try to break out of repetition,
there are other ways to bring that
feeling across well.
nice.
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| My stranger.
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2006-05-03
Strangers do have that unknown that is very mysteriously inticeing.
Very very good peom.
love it.
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| emo
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2006-05-02
Takes afew reads,
but comes across with a flow!
A FLOW go you.
i'm proud
*tear*.
its actually pretty good.
nice work meady.
<7
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| bitches
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2006-05-02
half & half i guess
<7
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| nothing of importance
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2006-05-02
Well, how do you explain anger? With LOOOVe
ily
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| Pain
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2006-05-02
Holla Meady,
You know what to do with pain? Find someone who doesn't make you pain and enjoy that person
<3
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| Diffrent?
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2006-03-10
Grass is greener...
its short and sweet.
nice.
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