Charlie fan

2009-04-01
Somehow I find this poem incredibly sexy.

2008-12-02
wow, stunning. i like the ideas it brings up, the sun and moon always chasing each other, diametric. umm, a small suggestion, i think if you changed the last 'my eyes' to just 'mine', it gives it a crisper ending. =) great poem.

2008-10-10
great poem, i like the rhyme scheme... it is subtle.

2006-11-06
this has good flow and well-timed pauses. cadence mimics the soughs of a prairie, good one!

2006-11-01
this is a beautiful poem, i like the image of stray by the sea, unique and evocative.

2006-03-14
I love these lines, "And I know / What dreams are made of? / How fairy tale are thought of." They speak of a revolution in a me. With your permission, I'd like to take your poem and edit/revise it and give it back to you. May I?