| Happy holidays, darling (three fucking weeks without you)
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2010-05-30
Good luck...
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| In the morning
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2010-04-05
Good write ....enjoyed the piece...thanx for sharing.
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| The Rain Falls, Then it stops
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2009-08-25
Sad but with a positive note of consolation at the end...its the way of life...and law of nature...if you believe in...
Perhaps, Rain, Rainbow and the sunshine are the ways of life...have faith do good ...then the good returns to us one day...
good write up. Thanx.
Bhakta
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| Feeling
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2009-08-18
Highly emotive piece. Enjoyed a good read. I really like these lines
"Wherever it takes me, I'm nursing the
strange part, feeding my killer child:
Knowing as if I always knew,
While I never knew me;"
And the metaphor used.
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| Just a proposal...
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2008-01-31
Simple, explicit and emotive with a positive note towards the end.
Regards
Bhakta
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| green eyes
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2007-09-01
I found it highly sensual.
Nice thought.
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| a wake
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2007-08-22
Beautifully said. Good imagination with the good play of words.
I liked it very much.
Bhakta Raj Giri
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| ^**Dream Lover^**
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2007-02-02
Love to read ur write up. But u see as Frued said "Dreams are the royal road to heaven'. At least u get satisfaction through dreams.
WIth Regards
Bhakta
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| your beauty
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2007-02-02
Excellent thought. I loved the metaphors used.
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| Tonight My Love
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2006-12-11
Beautiful and emotive. I wish your beloved would be with you to kill your solitude. Love never dies and can't be separate as Zachary P. B. said. Thank you for sharing.
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| A contrast of want and need
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2006-12-11
Your poem is a real epitom of today's world. More people should read it, especially those who consider themselves as 'haves' so that widening gap between 'haves' and 'have-nots' could be minimized if they could realised.
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| Savage
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2006-12-11
Really emotive and true.
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| The Weight of A Tear
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2006-12-07
Yes Kathy. There are more people across the globe silently suffering more than what we could imagine. It seems the phylosophy 'Fill what is empty and empty what is filled' is no more valid.
Excellent piece!
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| !!!MY ANGEL FOREVER!!!
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2006-12-07
WONDERFUL! fULL OF POSITIVE VIBRATION.
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| The Great Poem Is Lost
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2006-12-07
Your poem itself is a sample of a Great Poem. Cool Down Please!
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| Labour Government
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2006-12-07
I love the way you are. You are another Alexander Pop for me.
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| Lourdes- the talented the wise
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2006-12-07
Highly emotion and very good placement of diction.
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| Sometimes
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2006-11-29
I really liked the ending of your poem.Espicially, these lines
'you could say hi, you could smile, myabe it'd make a difference.
But sometimes thats all it takes
to brighten up someones day
so give it a try next time you take a ride...'
It really begs for humanity.
Best WIshes
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| Sometimes
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2006-11-29
I really liked the ending of your poem the the lines
'you could say hi, you could smile, myabe it'd make a difference.
But sometimes thats all it takes
to brighten up someones day
so give it a try next time you take a ride...'
It really begs for humanity.
Best WIshes
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| God As A Human Bloom
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2006-11-29
You have well expressed. This is very true. I like the line 'A blossom of love in flesh'.
Thank you for sharing.
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| Every Day (Daybreakers Everyday Life Challenge)
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2006-11-29
True! Each day is new and challenging too. You have well said in unmost simplicity.
Thanx for sharing.
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| I Look Up to You(To My Father)
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2006-11-16
That is true David. You have so strongly expressed your feelings. It remained me of my own days those were gone. I really like the line 'As I was 5, my first day of school, I...and to make friends.
Parents are the only living Gods and the role models for us n the source of our inspirations.
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| Knowledge: The Golden Rule
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2006-11-16
Hi! Its great! So beautifully expressed. Thank You for sharing.
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2006-11-11
sorry for the repeated posting as there was some problem with my internet connection.
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2006-11-11
It seems to me the writer is going through a serious mentel conflict trapped in a win win situation.
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2006-11-11
It seems to me the writer is going through a serious mentel conflict trapped in a win win situation.
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| you
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2006-11-11
It seems to me the writer is going through a serious mentel conflict trapped in awin win situation.
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| power
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2006-11-11
Well said in a very few sentences. Yes, it the 'power' if it is misused leads to corruption.
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| long way love
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2006-11-11
Very well expressed a deep sense of lonliness that touches every heart.
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| BELIEVE IN YOURSELF
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2006-08-15
Your poem believe in yourself is really encouraging. I really liked the flow. I strongly feel that everyone must read it.
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