Slipping Down

I hang by a thread

High above the ground below

A single tear drop



Haiku by Paul Vermette
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Written on 2016-06-12 at 09:23

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Every line a poem itself, and together a perfect and powerful haiku.
Ashe
2016-06-14


Kathy Lockhart
The vulnerability, the images, each line all paint a powerful Haiku with just the 'write' words. Excellent! kathy:)
2016-06-13


Christopher Fernie The PoetBay support member heart!
Dear Paul,

I love the complex simplicity of haiku, the way it condenses all our being; I love this example.

Cheers, Chris
2016-06-12


shells
I really enjoyed this Haiku, powerful and poignant.
2016-06-12


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Very descriptive and picturesque

Elle x
2016-06-12