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Darkened Image/engraved sounds
Sidewalk pavements/sidestreet sacraments/rainfall doubts
Pinprick atmosphere/violets smooth as violins
Play for ocean dollars sing/waves are filling up the sands
Heartbeats time the buildings fall/domino toe abstract mines
Lines erasing /ceiling casing cracking/ joints awry
Choral chordings /fretboards breaking
Engraved sounds/darkened Image



Poetry by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2016-09-08 at 02:11

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i like the first three and last lines when the / replaces a verb. the poem changes tone between those lines, with less pointedness.

a good series of images, resolves as it should, on the tonic.
2016-09-08