THE LOOPY LOOP BUS! (A return to a snach story-verce)

I stepped on too - The Loop Bus
In to a conversation in progress
I sat down in the middle of the two talking
One behind me other just in front - who were listening
The one behind me were saying:
''She said she would dig him up''; ''Encase her were still alive!''
'' She had a mobile put in his coffin, you know! ''
'' Just so she could call ''him to talk with him! ''
My greatest regret is I got off at my stop, now I will never know how that conversation when on!

Now you know why the Loop Bus - is called The Loopy Loop



Poetry by ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2017-11-30 at 12:45

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Ajoshberry
This is such clowinish..... Kudos!. Joshua.
2018-01-09


Ajoshberry
This is such clowinish..... Kudos!. Joshua.
2018-01-09


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2017-12-28


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
That's a brilliant one Ken. Top marks mate :)
2017-12-01



You got into a conversation that would be worth missing your stop and coming back. Of course, the mobile will lose its charge in no time and then there would be no more communication. But, dig him up to see if he's still alive? That's very curious. Good one! :)
Ashe
2017-12-01


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Ah yes, being privy to a personal moment between other people... this made me think of that. It's one of those moments when you'll never know the conclusion and you'll be left to wonder...

Once a woman called my phone number, accusing me of inopportuning her and her husband's life... It obviously had nothing to do with me, it was just a wrong number. But I always wondered what happened to that woman and the man in her life... Sometimes we are just part in a snippet. Enjoyed this very much - thanks.
2017-11-30



Oh, that is an intriguing conversation!
2017-11-30