Wow! it was tough thinking of a title for this poem ;-)


Grey


Grey souls
and grey eyes
emptiness haunting
beneath grey skies
and there i watch the grey past
as it digs my grey grave
and slowly uncontrollably
i drift towards the grey edge
and the grey seeps in
and claws at my very soul
and the grey ashes
of my cherished memories
all begin to dissolve
as the emptiness of the grey
drinks the last drop
of my grey life.

Well that was cheery wasn't it? :-)


© Rik - 07/08/2006




Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-06-08 at 01:26

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey Rik a very sombre poem and i know a tongue in the cheek smile probably a very clever text and well constructed
stay cool man lololol well done
2006-06-08


Malin Johansson
I would think that the headline is really grey ( great) :) lololol
Great poem here Rik...
2006-06-08