Current Mood: kidding around...
Current Music: "Nothing to Prove" - Caroline's Spine
NOTE: 2020 08 11 10H28 EST On Writing My First Ghazal -
On Writing My First Ghazal
- ;) ... while figuring out the form (which I didn't find too obvious), these are the lines that came to me...
I took a few days to mull it over
Still think it'll be tricky for good results!
So I tried this, and I even tried that
All sounded too gimmicky for good results!
A capricious little form this one is
One'd say, most finnicky for good results!
'Cause look at all I could manage so far
Poor thing's all clunky; not good results!
So, I, Ms. Moods, must concede defeat
Am too much of a rookie for good results!
Diary by F.i.in.e Moods

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Written on 2020-08-11 at 17:06
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