Inspired by the beauty of F.i.n.e Moods and M.A Meddings poetry, i thought i would write something a little more upbeat.


Always


And then i looked into your eyes
and i knew
that you knew me
we walked along the river bank
and your beauty
overthrew me.

So i stopped a while
to drink your smile
and hold your tender hand
we shared a kiss
i found life on your lips
and you took me
to another land.

So it's in these memories
that you live
forever your shadow cast
and i will never forget you
hold you quietly
and safe
always
within my heart.


© Rik - 09/06/2006



Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-06-10 at 00:08

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Daybreaker
Oh, how warm and tender!

I love the lines:

So i stopped a while
to drink your smile
and hold your tender hand
we shared a kiss
i found life on your lips
and you took me
to another land.


Good work!
2006-06-19


Arti
Beautiful. The eyes must have been real deep to hold your attention first....
She must be real lucky who found a poet's heart to live in...

Arti
2006-06-11


Kathy Lockhart
lovely, pure heaven to read. the smiles of my heart reflect upon my face. This is a sweetheart! :) kathy
2006-06-10



Great! In this text one can feel the inspiration by F.i.n.e and Mike, and at the same time it is so much Rik!
2006-06-10


Amanda K
when u find love,you find a new world of you didn't tread b4. congra on finding love.

Regards,
Amanda
2006-06-10


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
You young smoothie lolololol this is a beautiful accolde to the ladies
and so well crafted book mark for me lolololol but i guess you saw her first

a very good text Rik wel done rgds mike
2006-06-10



"So i stopped a while
to drink your smile"

...really i love this poetry!!!! kissess
2006-06-10