Full Sway

There never was just another day
A sea unseen, (she says) a sky so gray
With rain we wish the time away
It's plain as if as though there were something there before
Oh yes, ( what is ) I know, ( not you ) or me
Constellations swinging in full sway
There never was, just another day



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Written on 2022-08-07 at 20:17

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Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
I love poems where the first and last lines repeat themselves so it seems that the poem is a snapshot, and your poem does precisely that. Thank you for sharing it.
2022-08-12