Comatose

A brilliant sunrise flatters what's become
A very dreary land. Two days of wind
Have stripped the gaily colored leaves
From all the trees. The world's uniformly
Brown, and will be for the next four
Months, a patient in a coma underneath
An unattractive quilt, unless it snows,
And then, oh, god, we'll call the poor
Thing dead.





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Written on 2024-11-20 at 16:19

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alarian The PoetBay support member heart!
Now I think it is a very nice vignette
what are your influences in poetry ?
never dared to ask you before
I felt it when I read the last line
sounded very author-like
2024-11-20