the breaking of a heart


"there is a way to run up a mountain"
he told the princess

"but I only know how to fly"
she replied

"you have to run"
he said firmly

"it is impossible , running is only done in fairy tales"
she said with voice breaking

"then our ways have to part my love"
the young warrior almost whispered
_ he did not look her in the eyes as he gently let go of her small hand
and started walking

She was never mentioned by him ever after



Words by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-07-09 at 18:02

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beautifully written....amazing. God bless you.
2006-07-19


pia
How sad.....and how painfully beautiful She wanted to fly because she was a princess ...she was only looking down -could see love ...a beautiful beautiful poem from you -Pia
2006-07-11


Teala
This gave me chills..I had to reread it a few times you to bask in the feeling of awe!
2006-07-11


English War Veteran aged 98
Wonderful wonderful!!!
I prefer to catch the train or get a Taxi in my frail old age - but can never run!

Oh! wonderful !!
2006-07-10


Ron. S. King
I simply loved this, it stayed in my mind and I re-read it to let the words flow once again...Indeed, you are a writer and poetess!...Ron.
2006-07-10


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there Lourdes this poem so simply attaches to the heart and breaks it as you read a very sad narrative imagery is fine and so reminisvent of many of Burne Jones paintings in the Briar Rose series
well done rgds Michael
2006-07-10