Go Figure

 

My biggest complaint?

Me and my mundaine existence.

 

My second?

Inconsiderate or mean people.

 

Overall and generally?

The world could be so much better.

 

But all of that doesn't matter -

What I think or feel, who cares.

 

Inconsequential

Insignificant

 

That's all it simply is really,

Yet here I am telling you anyway.

 





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Written on 2025-04-05 at 13:07

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Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
And you know, we are interested to read it too! Actually I thought the construct was pretty clever. I liked the complaints, and all was well until you said you were insignificant. Nobody is truly insignificant. Everybody is unique. The problem (maybe it is a blessing) is that we can't see the wood for the trees! Blessings, Allen
2025-04-05


Albert Vynckier The PoetBay support member heart!
you get alway overrun by your sadness in a way, no time to complain..
sadness is related to weakness don't you think?
pain is something else, we don't handle the same amount of pain
sadness isnt' it more about emotional feelings when pain is more physical ?
2025-04-05

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