The third stanza to the challenge


Love

Hands meet, eyes embrace,
your destiny in motion
Life - no longer yours



Haiku by pia
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Written on 2006-07-15 at 13:00

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salem
it's deep true
2006-12-08


salem
it's deep true
2006-12-08


Valentin Gabriel Cristea
Nice touch of feelings.I can feel the power of your poem.I liked your poem.Shiver of love comes into your poem.Good job!Nicely done.
2006-09-10


Amanda K
it's no longer yours it's for the both of u. Alovely piece.
Love,,,,,,
2006-08-06


Teala
So romantic and beautiful..
2006-07-29


Lourdes
how true , and so frightening correct that my goosebumps give my desire for loneliness away. I detest love.
I adored this haiku.
2006-07-20


Arti
"Life - no longer yours"
But mine so much more...
2006-07-15


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
wow pia this is such a lovely respons to the challenge can you put a note saying it is the third stanza to the challenge please rgds

mike
2006-07-15