For those who know me read it slow. For those who don't know me read it slower :-)


Time


I can not count my steps anymore
The dam was breached long ago
I wonder - what would you say
If time could be rolled back
There are still apples in the orchard
We only had time to pick a few
It seems all so very distant now
But time can never spoil the view
You spent so much time
To look so beautiful
So why waste your time with me
If you wanted to occupy my space
You should of understood my fears
Known me by desire
Cried with me when the swan died
You should have shared the same tears
And the clocks just keep ticking
Now all the memories have breached the dam
And in time - i will be washed away
Every footprint
Every thought
Every word - i did ever say
It all seems so very distant now

But time!

Can never spoil the view.


© Rik - 01/09/2006



Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-01 at 13:04

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Morpheus
Rik, this made me cry. For, I have also seen apples in the orchard being forgotten. Thank you for sharing this. Joel
2006-09-02


Daybreaker
Beautiful, and I agree - you're texts should be read slowly!

Beautiful time!
2006-09-02


Emeka Chike Nwogu
You write so well, my friend. I like this piece.
Surprising how time flies. Write on.
2006-09-01


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Rik fast or slow they are all a great work of art

'And the line there are still apples in the orchard'

wonderful imagery well done rgds mike
2006-09-01


seda
very cool ( ive read it slowly :)
2006-09-01


Kathy Lockhart
i love reading them slow. Each word, each line has its purpose its own meaning. then the whole of it all, the sound it makes coming from my own voice, makes it so personal. You have a way of bringing a soft light that glows on these ideas and your deeply felt emotions. Beautiful!
2006-09-01