(Lastromantichero's - Epitath Challenge)


Grave yard of dreams


It's in the grave yard of dreams i now walk
and there to the gostly shadows i do talk
my spiritual wreck is buried here
with all my memories and all my fears
and beside them lay only one regret
that you my true love
i have never met.

So if by chance you should happen by
stay a while but do not cry
lay a flower without a tear
to comfort me in all my fear
and i will watch you from above
cherish and care for you
my - true love.


© Rik - 06/09/2006



Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-06 at 15:15

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she
Sweet,but with a sad twist...why does your true love pass by when you are already so gone? But I like the fact that though she lays the flower next to your fears, you are watching her from up...and she knows she is not a lone.
I simply love it!
2006-11-14


sania
v. good work
2006-09-09


Mr.Mist
I dont know any words to describe the feeling I got from this...
*Bookmarked*

-mr.m
2006-09-08


BlueyedSoul
Talk about unrequited love.... this is really sad! But great writing and a creative twist to epitaths.
~Cindy
2006-09-06


Michael G
a sad nicely written poem full of emotion!
2006-09-06


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
wow Rik an excellent write and a lovely if heart rending contribution thanks for joining in rgds mike and stay easy man lolololol
2006-09-06



It would be difficult not to let that tear roll down. Very difficult.
2006-09-06