Some day you'll be faitful



you can't trade destiny with heaven
from your first to your last
the air you breathe will always be yours

the skies are unreachable
even for longing hands
but I'm here, ripping your universe apart

and it's such a nice colour for you
when the sky turns blue to grey
oh, how lovely it is
to see your transparent
ignorance fade

so just keep on exploding my insides, baby
cause' I'm a supernova




Poetry by theo
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Written on 2006-10-08 at 17:53

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Mukul Dahal
This is fantastic in terms of depth of feeling and expression. Each line is well wrought.
2006-10-29


Jessica Rexroat
I liked the whole poem, I absolutely LOVED the last line!!!!!!!!
2006-10-15


Amanda K
i wonder why ppl didn't commen on it.it's a great poem.it's short but very meaningful and i loved most when u said the skies are unreachable
even for longing hands

Fantastic,,,,,,,,
2006-10-14


J. E.
Power. Love it.
2006-10-08