about the prettiest girl i know


moon girl

Stolen glances by a look
How I cherish those I took
Store them deep inside my mind
The only place you can't find




Afraid to let you see
Afraid to tell you how beautiful you are to me
You are like the moon
Here one moment then gone to soon
Green eyes dark hair
Can't stop from stare





These plain words I hate
They lack power style and fate
Falling short to describe
The trueness you have inside




Must keep these feelings to myself
Mustn't tell nobody else
Must wait for the right time
Just the right time to make you mine

So until then these feelings must linger


Like a book that hasn't been read
Like a dream that hasn't be fed
Like the door that hasn't been rung
Like a song that hasn't been sung


Beauty is only skin deep
UN true yours goes much deeper than that




Poetry by philip reis
Read 1004 times
Written on 2006-11-22 at 18:12

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ardent.March
I can't believe this has been read 69 times and only 4 people have commented! I think this is an amazing poem! :)

You need one more 'o' in :
here one moment, gone too soon.

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2007-03-29


salem
so great one
tender
powerful
thanx

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2007-03-07


betsy Firefly
Sounds like someone's fallen head over heels here...
2007-03-06


seda
this poem is great!!

''Beauty is only skin deep
UN true yours goes much deeper than that ''

I felt love in those lines...

regards,
Seda

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2007-01-31