the world never lets your mind slip into a life gving coma that it needs


daydreamer

You sit in your room daydreamer
Away away away
From the things you face every day
Tired of their pain
Tired of their game
This world is so much trouble
How you long to be in your bubble
There you face not a thing
There you are a loud to sing
Drift off to space
Stop caring about the human race
Focus on the problems of your life
The pain, anger, strife
……………………love
The only gift from above
How much joy and pain in these 4 little letters
They bring you back and put you in fetters
You think about it all the time
Trapping your spirit soul and mind
Daydreamer you are never free
Free to be a daydreamer
In entirety

You’re always brought back in to this world of hate
By some twisted mandate
Of fate
O how you long to be free a daydreamer in entirety



Poetry by philip reis
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Written on 2007-02-13 at 04:01

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Saga
This is a great and very interesting piece!!
2007-04-11



And this is BOOKMARKED by the way!
2007-03-26



Wonderful. Its a nice poem to read!!! And I liked the idea of the poem. Isent daydreaming a great thing?! To be lost in your own little world with no worries?
The last part was very strong. Thanks for posting.
Sally
2007-03-26


kath
and yet ... I read the force of daydreaming into this poem .. for in those dreams I belive we will find our way .... they are the way we can see what we want of life .... and maybe every daydream is not meant to be but we need them to keep in touch with ourselves


I enjoyed your poem ... well done
best wishes
kath
2007-03-18


Craig Frazer
Exceptional insight and writing, good poem!
2007-03-16


nature
we have alot in comon
well written
thank you
2007-03-15


Zoya Zaidi
A VERY WELL CONCIEVED AND WRITTEN POEM.
Welcome to the bay!
((Hugs))
Love, Zoya
2007-03-14


moon smile
Keep dreaming it is the essence of our longing for our aims far oclose,just that would recharge our souls with great strength , a daydreamer can hold the sky with just raising hands ,or touch a magical oses or even smell the breez of spring in the gloomy winter.great piece of poetry.
2007-03-13


Kiran
Brilliant poem; we're all day dreamers at times and it's nice to escape the reality of this world, but you never know, sometimes dreams can come true! :-)
2007-03-07


betsy Firefly
One day you will discover that the dreams inside that 'daydream bubble' may come true. Well written. Don't stay in thr bubble too long, life is too short and there is a purpose for you here. That's evident. I love your poems!!
2007-03-06


Karen Canning
the ending is very powerful, a great piece of deep poetry that makes the reader think

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-02


seda
I liked it DayDReamer!! :) Nice Work

love,
Seda
2007-02-13


Freeman
WOW!!! I loved your daydreamer-poem!!! =D
It feels as if you know me so well...and so many others!

Thanks a lot my friend, I will bookmark this one!

/Henrik from Sweden
2007-02-13