It might be the case

 

It might be the case
that satisfaction is making itself known
circling and passing through
although destinations evaporate
maybe certainty
hides its face
until I do not need to see





Poetry by efflux
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Written on 2006-12-16 at 18:05

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betsy Firefly
I'd beg to differ with Robbie here; it may SEEM cool, but in reality it's death and doom.

Get a goal and fix your eyes firmly on it!
2007-01-01


Rob Graber
I really like how this meanders into the mist, or maybe evaporates into (apparently ) nothing. The aimless mood reminds me of an old John Sebastian classic, "What a Day for a Daydream," or Paul Simon's "59th Street Bridge Song." No question: Aimlessness can be very cool.
2006-12-16