Another poem Inspired by the Film "Amor Inmortal"


Eternally


The surface is fragile
the surface that you walk upon
yet there is strength deep within
discarded faces spiral
the world will not look at you
as they understand nothing
you are the glimmer of existence
a dream that whispers throughout the night
the sorrow in a tear drop that never dies
and as i wake and look upon you
my angel, my love
i understand that time has no meaning
and death is but a gesture
for my soul is forever yours
and will eternally lie
in the sanctuary of your heart.


© Rik - 18/04/2007



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Written on 2007-04-18 at 14:36

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Wow.... What more can be said? Nothing. Nothing at all....
2007-05-25



Through eternity and beyond all time, love will shine rik! I adore your poem. Thank you for expressing your inspired poetic heart, Tai
2007-05-22


Peter Humphreys
It is really hard to know what to say that has not already been said below. This is tender, loving and complex. A beautiful poem.
2007-05-21


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Inspire poetry Rik you return and hit us with these brilliant images wel done in my book marks
2007-05-02


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
"death is but a gesture
for my soul is forever yours
and will eternally lie
in the sanctuary of your heart"

- *and she melted on her chair right there* ;) so very beautiful... i lack the words this morning... but oh my, you do have a way with words that make a heart dream in smiles... i'm left all sighing warmly, and floating in the tenderness and romance of these words... death is but a gesture... what a line :) so very very good, uh-huh *nods head* ;) :) *hugs* :*
2007-04-25


TheLine
There sure is strength deep within this poem.
I like it a lot. Really good written. Bravo.
2007-04-20


Zoya Zaidi
How lovely!

"i understand that time has no meaning
and death is but a gesture
for my soul is forever yours"

You write very tender love poems dear Rik!

(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2007-04-18



Pure unadulterated love here rik! Beautifully expressed I must say. Yes eternity, is loves most prescious gift. It never dies. Smiling at your romantic heart, Tai
2007-04-18


Saga
Just like "The The" said, "Love is stronger than death, nice one man!!
2007-04-18


Kiran
A very romantic piece, beautifully written. The flow was serene and gentle. Lovely poem, well done with this. :-)
2007-04-18


nature
deeper than deep
the sorrow in the teardrop that never dies
i loved this one
2007-04-18


yoonoos peerbocus
a good flow of ideas..excellent
2007-04-18


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
A lovely poem Rik and demonstrates the essential beauty of your love poems well done rgds My hat off to you
rgds mike
2007-04-18


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
very inspiring and beautiful words

Elle x
2007-04-18